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59148 No.3473599

ill just leave this here

No.3473600
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No.3473606

I'm 12 and what is this?

No.3473667

Nice pixel work

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No.3473711

Interesting

No.3473761

Okay, I'll bite.

Is this actually a game in progress, or is it just concept art.

No.3473763

Why couldn't we have pixels this good back in the day? Its amazing what you can do with them now, detail wise. Underrated art form, imo.

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Background looks okay, comparable to backgrounds in a Squaresoft title. Character sprites look subpar.

No.3473770

Fuck is this shit? also if it's not an actual game I don't care

No.3473774

>>3473770
>>3473761
it's a work in progress more info can be found on
https://lionx-dagger.itch.io/broken
tho updates are slow since game is made by one person not a studio

No.3473836

>>3473774
Furries vs. Humans trope kinda killed it for me, just seems like a really overplayed card.

No.3473838

>>3473767
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H9Urr2XOyxU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEJnpC1SuaE

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>>3473836
Not for me (not read enough of such fiction). I'll have FUN playing that.

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>>3473599
scene 1

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>>3473599
scene 2

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>>3473599
scene 3

No.3475186

if you see any error in text please let me know
my native is not English

No.3475212

>>3475186

Trying to catch the worst of them... (also "Sznsi"? how do you even pronounce that?)

>>3475183

I'll gonna be late -> I'm gonna be late

and since when you're in royal guard? -> and since when are you in the royal guard?

>>3475184

we all been waiting for you -> we've all been waiting for you

your brother he's always on time -> your brother? He's always on time

if I had nothign -> if I had nothing

apologize this instance. -> apologize this instant!

everyone else have fun at the festival -> everyone else is having fun at the festival

our next guest is! -> our next guest is...

>>3475185

and the last but not least on our list is -> and last but not least is

knell before me -> kneel before me

I didn't expecting you here -> I didn't expect you here (or "I wasn't expecting you here")

cry baby -> crybaby

There are also a ton of places that are missing some little bits of punctuation; not sure how much you care. It also maybe kinda adds to the retro-game feel, tho?

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>>3475212
thank you for your help :3

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No.3477254
>not porn

WHO
GIVES
A
FUCK

Delete this thread already

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No.3477651

>>3477645
I don't know how you will take this feedback, but consider making her tail stick closer, you know, to protect it. No need to swoosh it around when flaming arrows are falling all over the place.

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>>3477645

holy shit when is this gonna come out on steam?

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>>3477652

No.3477658

>>3477256 am i terrible for thinking this is genius for stupidity guy deserved to get his nuts stomped on.

No.3477701

>>3477652
unfortunately this might take a long while since i am only one person working on it, now i try to finish a prologue with will serve as a demo, it is more or less what you can see on the screens, but any support is more then welcome if you like you can fallow me on tweeter but i try to keep this threat update, unfortunately i know i am slow with my progress
https://twitter.com/lionx_Dagger

No.3477713

>>3477701

Are you asking for help on any of this, or just suggesting "support" like feedback and asspats? It does look interesting; thanks for posting it here. (you are... polski?)

Feel free to provide more text if you want it edited (honestly the first stuff I did was sorta halfassed). It's easy and kinda fun; it would be easier with a text file or something but whatevs.

No.3477738

>>3477713
more of a feedback what you think and critique on what you would change, any ideas are good as well

for the text theres not much at the moment

but thank you

No.3477840

>>3477202
Graphics are very DOS-like

No.3478003

>>3477653

Sauce of this pic. LOL!

No.3478037

>>3478017

This guy's shit is mostly sexuality taken to a sullen or dark place. Guy must really have relationship issues.

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No.3483843

>>3483842
Improve the stair climbing animation. The rest is fine.

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>>3483843
sure thing, thanks for the feedback

No.3483913

>>3483843

Is it even a separate animation? It looks just like a walkcycle but the sprite is moving upwards.

I think the run cycle while airborne is more jarring. A small jumping animation, or just a different pose while airborne may make those feel less stiff.

I like how it looks in general, tho.

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The sprite animation looks stiff.

Check out how Capcom animated X in this sheet. Notice how his arms and legs swing dramatically with every step. He appears to launch himself forward with every step, and it gives a strong sense of momentum when seen in action.

Your character's arms and legs barely move, and it gives the sense that she's lightly jogging around at high speed. You also need to add an extra animation for the double jump. That will help broadcast to the player that they've successfully performed the action.

No.3484634

>>3484604

Yes, Flashback was rotoscoped from live-action footage iirc. So was Out of this World (aka Another World) and the original Prince of Persia, which look similar.

No.3484647

>>3484604
Another World and its sequel Flashback are famous for using rotoscoping (tracing filmed footage) for their smooth animations.

No.3484670

>>3484647

>Another World

I know of that thing that exists. Listening to VG podcasts is informative as fuck.

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No.3485306

>>3485266
WHAT IS SHE EVEN GRABBING ONTO

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No.3487154

>>3487152

needs swimming animation for the pool looks like she is wearing iron boots inspired by the Legend of Zelda.

No.3487215

>>3487187

>without making new sprites

Or if they just don't want swimming as a gameplay thing... I agree just slowing down movements and altering the physics would make it feel better.

>>3487152

I'm not sure what's up with her tail disappearing when climbing those stairs, and why that animation only triggers on that one set of stairs and not the others.

I don't know about that placement of the sword (I assume that's the currently equipped weapon). Mid-screen seems likely to be a really important part of the play area, and it's covering a significant portion of it; you see it cover the character at one point, and it's really close to her when she's moving left. I'd expect that normally to be in one of the upper corners next to the other stuff. IMO the current stuff in the upper corners could be smaller (the bag could just be smaller, and the scroll(?) could be shoved offscreen further until it's "pulled down" or whatever).

I'm curious what happens when you run out of air; instant death or losing health?

Still looks great in general to me.

No.3487227

>>3487215

  • not really they just me one lonely otaku guy :(
  • the tail is simply not draw yet
  • the sword is attack it is suppose to be a mobile game but yes i will be switching positions with the action button since i have new concept for it
  • she do slow down in water just forgot to change the gravity as well thx for reminding me :3

and yes in water she will kinda swim and there will be differentia animation for it they are simply not done yet ¯\(ツ)

No.3487234

>>3487227

>mobile game

Oh okay, that makes a lot more sense; nevermind on the UI suggestions, then. Good luck with that, but I dunno if it's possible to make a mobile platformer with non-terrible controls.

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No.3491251

>>3485306
Easy there, JonTron.

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No.3491792

>>3491783
Nice disappearing tail.

No.3491804

>>3491783

Falling off the edge of that platform is very sudden; are you just changing the velocity to a constant immediately? Having actual acceleration should feel a lot better, or make it much more gradual if you already have some now.

No.3491843

>>3491792
thanks i like it too makes people to say stuff like this :)
>>3491804
this is caused by gif i kinda messed up the timestamps on it :V

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>>3496500
Make rolling on stairs impossible. Because that is ridiculous.

No.3496619

>>3496534
its a game not real life and sliding upstairs is more ridiculous thats why i change it to rolling.

No.3496620

>>3496619
You can make it fast climbing.

No.3496622

I hope the framerate is better in the actual game than in these gifs because no one is going to play it if it's a stuttery unresponsive slideshow

No.3496634

>>3496622
game runs in 30 fps and the footage is recorded in 10 fps

No.3496783

>>3496634
>>30 fps
All the kiddies are going to bitch that it's not AYCHE-DEE!!©®™ and 2000fps.

No.3504083

>>3504055
Well I don't know, but thanks for bumping.

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>>3504055
i do not work much on it so theres litery any progress atm

No.3505058

>>3505042
It's going to be really sould crushing when you finally post it on the android play store and get 5 downloads in a year

No.3505074

>>3505058
it will not since i already released game that get 1 more or less download per month on a PC

it got pirated and Russians likes to play the pirate version of it

so do not worry about that :3

No.3505368

>>3505042
As long as you do NOT fucking give up on it. I want to play it in my lifetime.

No.3505396

>>3505368
If you like uninspired boring game with clunky mechanic

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wall bump

No.3505442

when this game comes out on steam I would leave a message "made in lulz" a master piece!

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>>3505442
idk if made exactly in lulz but sure why not

No.3505492

>>3505447
Make sure she does not teleport into the ledge. Improve the grabbing animation, and account for distance.

No.3505541

>>3505492
thanks but i am afraid i will leave it as it is now :)

No.3505542

Looking good so far.

I'd add a more calm rest pose and only play the 'impatient foot tapping' (or some other idle animation, e.g. pulling an oversized hourglass out of the pocket and putting it back) after some time of inactivity.

So, any download link yet?

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>>3505542
you mean something like this?

and no theres no download atm

No.3505768

Looking good; thanks as always for sharing.

>>3505439

I wonder if shaking the whole screen (along with the UI) would make you "feel" the thud a bit more. Or maybe that's too much.

No.3506017

>>3505904
nope just one man army

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>>3509345

you should work more on modernizing your engine, throw in a dynamic day/night cycle and fancy animated clouds or lots of parallax layers, pretty particle effects and so on to make it look less like something you threw together in Game Maker Studio

No.3509367

>>3509345
and now I've got the faxanadu music stuck in my head, thanks a bunch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kyDtV5zL1TU

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>>3509364
well it is suppose to be simple so i can drawn it :3
i am not planing on braking any box office sails or awards for graphic

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>>3509372
Reminds me of that episode of spongebob where squidward sneaks at night to have one bit of that krabby patty.

cap: sqidy

No.3509383

>>3509364
Non-developers sure expect a lot from a project made by one person.

No.3509429

>>3509372
Not seeking to be too critical here...

>>sneak pass

English is not your first language, is it?
Have some peeps proofread your dialogue before it gets released. Doesn't have to happen now, just something to keep in mind down the road.

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>>3509436

No.3509504

>>3509429

>Not seeking to be too critical here...

Wouldn't want to be too harsh on lulz, heavens no

He's polish iirc, and I assumed knows that this english is noticeably broken.

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>>3509372

"Oh excuse my princess!" -> "Oh excuse me, princess!"

"... stay in your chainbers it is to dangerous outside here." -> "... stay in your chambers; it is too dangerous outside."

"... sneak pass the guards" -> "... sneak past the guards"

"tap on the left side of screen ..." -> "tap on the left side of the screen ..." or probably just "tap the left side of the screen ..."

"... and lightly slide in given direction" -> "... and I'll lightly slide in the given direction" but I'm not sure if I'm understanding what you're even trying to say here. I take it you tap the left side of the screen, which makes her do that sneaking motion in the direction she's already facing?

I would suggest just: "tap the left side of the screen to move quietly" or "to move sneakily".

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>>3509514
thx but i hope you will not clame legal right to that text and sue me :DD for using your fix :P

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>>3509514

No.3509945

>>3509916
Was ist das?

No.3509951

>>3509504
how do you know where i am from a Spy! :OOOO

and yes i do know that text if full of errors atm this is rough version of the text since atm i am more focusing on the mechanic and level design :)

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>>3516539 OMG you're back! Also, looks like a major plot-twist is on the cards.

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No.3517853

I've seen this thread around for longest of time, but haven't given it much attention.
Are there any binaries of this game?

No.3517900

>>3517853
nope not atm making games take quite a lot time especially when it's after work hobby project

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>>3473599
simple night/day cycle

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>>3473599
with one you thing looks the best of those?

or if you have your own idea please let me know

No.3521772

>>3521770
good point it might been a problem but theres a safety that while attacking player can't fall off the ledge

and well to be honest its less for attacking more to be fun to use since after stunning an enemy game goes to a tun base system of fight

No.3521843

>>3518664

Are you planning on gameplay happening during all of this? The night parts seem rather dark.

Also I assume you just haven't gotten to it yet, but seeing 15:4 as a time is really jarring. You really want to 0-pad the minutes (like 15:04).

>>3521769

I assumed 2 and 3 would have ended with a sword slash or the sword sticking out or something.

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No.3523385

>>3523071

Looks good, but her fall seems a little slow at the end. I would've expected her to keep accelerating a bit more.

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>>3523360
>>3523363
it will be done when its done :P
but tbh would be hard to provide such thing to be accurate and would had to update it then deupdate it if a new bug i mist to be fix

pic related

>>3523385
ok ill increase it a bit more

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>>3473599
warning contains some spoilers

took me around two weeks to do this section :/ if that helps anyone establish anything

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>>3523623 fixed some spelling errors hopefully got them all

No.3523817

>>3523360

Progress bars don't go into the negatives

No.3523887

I enjoy the tile work you've been doing. One recommendation I would make if I can is to make the characters a bit cleaner and simpler in their design, limit the number of colors/shades used and make better use of saturated colors / spot colors so that the characters stand out better from the background.

alternatively you could do what the later castlevania games did and give everyone an eye bleeding border or motion blur effect

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>>3523887
redesign the main character at this point would be to much work beside i kinda like her design to be honest :V

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No.3527637

>>3525982

"I black out" -> "I blacked out"

"I don't know how long I was out, but when I woke up, Ris was carrying me and the night seemed as bright as day. I knew I shouldn't look back, but I had to get one last glimpse of my home..."

[I took a few more liberties with this one. Saying "for how long I was unconscious" is technically more correct than just "how long I was unconscious", but imo it flows better the "wrong" way. You can say "unconscious" instead of just "out" like I said above; it's a style choice.]

Next: "It was like staring at my past. As the castle burned to rubble, I wanted to scream, but no sound would come."

I say "castle" but I'm not sure if maybe a whole city is burning or what. Also some alternatives:

You could say "As it burned and crumbled" or "As it burned down and crumbled apart", or maybe "As it burned and crumbled down" but that seems awkward to me. Don't say "tumbling down", that sounds weird/wrong; crumbling is the closest word that came to mind. If you want to keep the -ing words, you could also change this to "As it kept burning and crumbling". Or maybe: "As it continued to burn". Many possibilities:)

Or another even more different wording: "It was like seeing my past burn down in front of my own eyes. I wanted to scream, but no sound would come."

I would also maybe suggest her "childhood" or "identity" instead of "past", if those actually make sense for the story's background, in your opinion.

Moving on:

"I clinged tightly to Ris, as I buried my crying face on his back. He stayed quiet, holding me safely and slowly taking me away from the castle as I gradually fell asleep."

I really like how this scene looks btw, the art and transitions and small bits of animation. (The broken english is really noticeable tho :) Just a little bit of feedback in general on the grammar: you are switching between present and past tense a lot. I stuck with past tense, which is more normal/traditional for storytelling.

No.3527638

>>3523658

Oh man, I missed this, it's been too long since I last saw this thread. This is indeed better; do you have someone else editing these? ;)

Some minor suggestions:

"Ah! I see you managed to get here first."

"What about Mom's collar? We can't just leave it here."

"There's no time; they could be here any minute!"

"Stop right there!" [just one '!', imo]

"Do you really think [...] with some help?" [no need for '!?' here]

This line: "Sorry my dear sister for what I'm about to do, farewell" is not so bad grammatically, but imo it's a bit much. I also dunno about using '*'s for... what, he's just saying this under his breath or something? I would suggest splitting his dialogue into two, so he says:

"No, but she doesn't know that."

Then move him so he's facing the bookshelf, then he says:

"Sorry, my dear sister, and farewell..." (or maybe "my dear Sznsi")

and then pulls the lever or fake book or whatever.

Moving on:

"Grr! You're gonna pay for that! Get him!"

Moving back a bit: this line was a little confusing to me:

"Bezor will be waiting for us securing the exit."

I'm not sure if you're saying that Bezor is protecting the exit or getting it ready or whatever and just waiting for Kai/Sznsi, or if Bezor is waiting for Kai/Sznsi to finish getting an exit ready. You could just shorten this to "Bezor will be waiting for us", perhaps. (Also I realize I'm nitpicking about little things that probably nobody will notice, but that's like all of this, hah.)

No.3527639

>>3527518

Also neat, I assumed from the other stuff that this was going to be realtime simple platforming combat. Something turn-based seems more practical for a mobile platform (is it just turn-based? or some kind of ATB-like system?)

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thx for your help
i mainly now try to grammer cheek and friends helped out some

as for battle system it will be a turn base but you will be able to pull more then one move at the same time or one stronger

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>>3527649
>>3527650
YOU CHEEKY FUCK

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No.3530700

I'll add this little sentence.

If you get sick of this place, please don't let yourself get sick of your game. Finish it, no matter where you end up posting it.

No.3530723

The effects are very nice.
You look like you put quite a lot of time into getting the pixels right.

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No.3530989

>>3528633

lol, I love those edge-teetering animations, reminds me of sonic 2 or kirby, but I feel like it could use more frames and be a bit slower.

ALso, just noticed this thread was first created over a year ago, wow!

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No.3531044

>>3531023
Nice save select screen

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No.3531743

>>3531739

Looks very nice. The placement of the "options" makes it a little harder to notice that it's there, since it's so close to the edge and that area is kinda busy and surrounded by similar colors.

No.3531800

>>3531799
the object those letters are on are the buttons tho

No.3531817

>>3531811
this screen is to replace the profile screen ¯\(ツ)

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>>3531825
now the options tag is little higher

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>>3473599
A or B ?

No.3532539

>>3532252

small/large text looks kinda weird

>>3532483

I assume these will be filled with more items; 2 rows or 3? Either seems okay to me, but B I think you'd want to animate the arrows a little to make sure the user notices them.

Also the corners of the window thing look to me like the X for a window that you click to close it, but that's not a big deal.

No.3532605

>>3532483
Depends. If there could be MORE options added later, then A. Otherwise, B makes empty space less distracting.

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No.3538612

Oh man, new stuff I kept missing. The "sliding into a wall" animation looks good, and the thing in >>3537317 looks pretty cool. Pottery throwing animation looks kinda odd to me but I dunno.

Edits for >>3538254 if you want em:

  • Dead, but what's that thing in its hands?
  • What do we have here?
  • You found an empty backpack. It once belonged to a great adventurer; let's hope you won't meet the same fate.
No.3538630

do you have like a site or a steam account to see updates on this game? My friends don't like it when I gave them the link to here.

No.3538651

>>3538630

https://lionx-dagger.itch.io/broken

No.3538681

>>3538630
ichi.io is prety dead more updates are here
https://twitter.com/lionx_dagger

No.3538880

>>3538681
Get ready for a follow!

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kinda wishing there was a gamedev thread cuz I don't wanna peacock and start my own but also don't wanna steal any of OP's thunder

No.3539266

>>3539258

> I don't wanna peacock and start my own

I'd say do it anyway. Was wondering what you've been up to.

No.3539268

>>3539258
Is this Kemoshota Fight Club?

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>>3539268 Yes it will be available for the Switch but not Playstation

No.3539279

>>3539268
By God, make it happen.

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>>3539266

been streaming gamedev work almost every day all year on piczel but I don't always announce it on IB because people wanna see smol pepes

also I never announce twitch streams for various reasons, kinda just got used to working on piczel where I can do what I want.

No.3539307

>>3539280
Is that Super Cat Planet 3?

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No.3540223

>>3540209

Not sure if these are just different outfits, or if you're trying to decide which pair to use? The one furthest on the left makes her look slightly pregnant or something to me. All the others look fine; I prolly like the middle-left look the best.

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>>3540223
those are pairs of old design with items and without
most likely ill be using the middle one :)

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>>3540209
This is a small thought I want to inject into your mind: while wearing shoes or not may be a matter of preference in a fictional (and maybe magical) universe, if you are a warrior with a sword, fighting other people with swords, it is possible they will target your feet to cripple you. Maybe add a simple protective cover plate as an option?

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>>3540249
Stomp the feet, breaking all those little bones. And then remember to stomp that groin again. Uss.

No.3540262

>>3540253
LeL

No.3540339

>>3540209
Lovely, but can we get a bit more revealing outfit two? Dont mind if its hard to unlock in game and all.

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>>3540339

No.3540937

>>3540930
Multipass?

No.3540944

>>3540930
Great.

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Shrek is going to kill me...

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string bikini looks hotter because it seems like it's covering up something

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>>3540937

>Multipass?
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>>3516539
the stage reminds me of this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zxqcWjP9sR8

No.3541475

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD71p_si_7Y

No.3541476

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lR5CvkJiu4

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